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학생이 쓴 원문
I\'m not a good chef but I can make many dishes.
The first dish that I can make is kimchi fried rice.
It has a very simple and easy recipe and I think it tastes good no matter how I make it.
First, fry kimchi until it will be orange.
Next, put rice(not raw) and meats.
Last, fry and enjoy.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I am glad to know that you can prepare your own food. When you will be away from your family, you must be able to prepare your own meals because it will save you a lot of money. You can start practicing now.
See you tomorrow.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
The first dish that I can make is kimchi fried rice.
>> Correct!
It has a very simple and easy recipe and I think it tastes good no matter how I make it.
>> It is a very simple and easy recipe and I think it tastes good no matter how I make it.
First, fry kimchi until it will be orange.
>> Correct!
Next, put rice(not raw) and meats.
>> Next, put cooked rice and the meat.
Last, fry and enjoy.
>> Lastly, fry and enjoy.
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