Task
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to wear make up when I become an actor.
I want that and I have to do that because all actors wear make up.
In this case, makeup not means only for more pretty.
In this case, the makeup shows the character\'s situation and position.
This makeup makes the audience can understand the character\'s situation.
So I have to wear makeup when I become an actor.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Yes you need to wear make up when you become an actor. You should.
See you in class!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
I want that and I have to do that because all actors wear make up.
>> Correct!
In this case, makeup not means only for more pretty.
>> In this case, makeup does not only mean to make one prettier.
In this case, the makeup shows the character\'s situation and position.
>>In this case, makeup shows the character\'s situation and position.
This makeup makes the audience can understand the character\'s situation.
>> This makeup makes the audience understand the character\'s situation.
So I have to wear makeup when I become an actor.
>> Correct!
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