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Of course, both of having a roommate and living alone have merits so I had difficulties when I choose one of them.
I want to make a roommate. I thought that having a roommate is uncomfortable but I want to change my mind when I go to LA.
I can learn English in my daily life and I can make a friend easier than living alone.
So I want to have a roommate in LA.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]!
Absolutely, you will learn a lot from others specially from a roommate. You are easy to deal with and can adjust to circumstances so have one.
Thanks for this answer. See you again next week!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
I want to make a roommate. I thought that having a roommate is uncomfortable but I want to change my mind when I go to LA.
>>I want to have a roommate. I thought that having a roommate is uncomfortable but I want to change that thought when I go to LA.
I can learn English in my daily life and I can make a friend easier than living alone.
>>I can learn English in my daily life and I can make friends easier than living alone.
So, I want to have a roommate in LA..
>> Correct!
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