Task
학생이 쓴 원문
When I will be an adult, I may suffer the situation that I have to work with someone who I don\'t like to work with.
This time, I have to show my professionalism.
The first thing that I can show professionalism is separating between working and life.
So I have to do my best at work but I don\'t contact him except at work.
강사 첨삭
Hi there again [이름]!
It is but professional to stay connected with work about work if you do not like to get into trouble.
The more you ask favor from someone from work, the more you need to give this favor back. So stay independent.
See you later in class.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
This time, I have to show my professionalism.
>> Correct!
The first thing that I can show professionalism is separating between working and life.
>> The first thing in which I can show professionalism is separating between work and life.
So I have to do my best at work but I don\'t contact him except at work.
>> So I have to do my best at work but I don\'t contact someone except about work.
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