Task
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to be a leader than a member.
The first reason is that I like to lead someone because I don\'t like to follow the idea that I disagree and always I want to make my idea the main idea.
The second reason is that I have the requisites that the leader has to get.
The requisites are leadership, decisiveness, tolerance, responsibility. I have all of them therefore I have the leader\'s requisites.
So I can be a good leader.
강사 첨삭
I could not agree more [이름]!
You are gifted to lead others. Make good use of this power to show them the right way. I am so proud of you.
Way to go!
See you!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
The first reason is that I like to lead someone because I don\'t like to follow the idea that I disagree and always I want to make my idea the main idea.
>> Correct!
The second reason is that I have the requisites that the leader has to get.
>> Correct! Or: get= possess
The requisites are leadership, decisiveness, tolerance, responsibility. I have all of them therefore I have the leader\'s requisites.
>>The requisites are leadership, decisiveness, tolerance, and responsibility. I have all of them therefore I have the leader\'s requisites.
So I can be a good leader.
>> Correct!
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