Task
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite fashion style is simple fashion like black and white.
When I was young, my fashion was terrible so my friends told me my fashion is very old.
So I learned about good fashion and I found the sentence that simple is the best.
So I always like simple fashion.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
They say that less is more. So always keep it neat, clean and simple with your fashion.
See you in class!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
When I was young, my fashion was terrible so my friends told me my fashion is very old.
>> Correct!
So I learned about good fashion and I found the sentence that simple is the best.
>> So I learned about good fashion and I found out about the sentence that says being simple is the best.
So I always like simple fashion.
>> Correct!
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