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Many people want to marry a beautiful lady, I also agree about this.
But It doesn\'t mean the only outside.
I think when I will choose someone who marries me, I regard the inside more than the outside.
So I will regard her personality and I like a lady who smiles a lot.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
I agree that choosing what is beautiful inside matters more than what we see outside physically. However, looks also matter. So I hope that you will have the most beautiful girl with the most wonderful attitude out there.
Catch you soon.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
But It doesn\'t mean the only outside.
>> But it doesn\'t mean the only important thing is the outside.
I think when I will choose someone who marries me, I regard the inside more than the outside.
>> I think when I will choose someone who will marry me, I will regard the inside more than the outside.
So I will regard her personality and I like a lady who smiles a lot.
>> Correct!
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