Task
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These days, the rate of divorce is increasing very rapidly.
So divorce has been one of the social problems.
About this, I think that we can\'t talk that divorce is wrong.
On the contrary, it\'s rectifying but it also means someone made a mistake.
So I think divorce is not bad but we have to be cautious when we choose to marry.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
These are matured views about marriage. It is true that we need to be cautious of who we marry as it is going to be forever.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
So divorce has been one of the social problems.
>> Correct!
About this, I think that we can\'t talk that divorce is wrong.
>> But I think, we can\'t say that divorce is wrong.
On the contrary, it\'s rectifying but it also means someone made a mistake.
>> Correct!
So I think divorce is not bad but we have to be cautious when we choose to marry.
>> Correct!
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