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2020-12-28 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

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I think it\'s different whether serious or not. If the wrong thing was not too serious, I will forgive my friends but it\'s very serious, I can\'t. I think almost all people think like me. Because I think any good people can\'t forgive the very serious wrong thing. If the man who was wronged by his friend forgives his friend, the man is almost like Buddha.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

You are absolutely correct. Being able to forgive a grave misconduct is divine.

See you later in class.

-T. Donna =)

I think it\'s different whether serious or not.
>> I think it\'s different whether it is serious or not.

If the wrong thing was not too serious, I will forgive my friends but it\'s very serious, I can\'t.
>> If the wrong thing was not too serious, I will forgive my friends but if it\'s very serious, I can\'t.

I think almost all people think like me.
>> Correct!

Because I think any good people can\'t forgive the very serious wrong thing.
>> Because I think any good person can\'t forgive the very serious wrong things.

If the man who was wronged by his friend forgives his friend, the man is almost like Buddha.
>>  Correct!

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