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학생이 쓴 원문
If I\'m blind, I will look for her mind and voice.
Now I don\'t look for looking, I look for her mind and talking.
So I will look for her mind and voice, it\'s not much different than now.
강사 첨삭
Hello and happy New Year to you [이름]!
Looks are paramount yet a beautiful heart and mind are rare. Go for these traits and you will be happy for the rest of your life.
See you next year!
-T. Donna =)
>> If I\'m blind I will find out about her mind and listen to her voice.
Now I don\'t look for looking, I look for her mind and talking.
>> Now I\'m not looking for looks, I look for a good mind and speech.
So I will look for her mind and voice, it\'s not much different than now.
>> Correct!
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