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학생이 쓴 원문
Frankly, I agree that owning a car makes one more attractive.
There are many things that can appeal to men or women.
One of them is owning a car.
It means I can go with you far from home and I can go to you anytime.
So it makes the person more attractive.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Well done here on you perfectly crafted short composition.
Write more in this manner so that you will not commit a lot of mistakes.
Congratulations!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
There are many things that can appeal to men or women.
>> Correct!
One of them is owning a car.
>> Correct!
It means I can go with you far from home and I can go to you anytime.
>> Correct!
So it makes the person more attractive.
>> Correct!
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