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I think I will reject someone rather than be rejected.
The reason is that if I am rejected, I feel very painful.
I think anyone doesn\'t like to be rejected.
Of course, people don\'t like to hurt someone but I think rejecting is better than being rejected.
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Very well said [이름]!
If I were not open minded, I would think that you are selfish. But then, I do not want to be in pain too.
Thanks for this answer and I shall see you again next week.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
The reason is that if I am rejected, I feel very painful.
>> The reason is that if I am rejected, I feel so much in pain.
I think anyone doesn\'t like to be rejected.
>> Correct!
Of course, people don\'t like to hurt someone but I think rejecting is better than being rejected.
>> Correct!
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