Task
학생이 쓴 원문
If I can be a commercial model of some product, I want to be a model of an electric car.
Because the electric car is good for the natural environment and their sounds are smaller than others.
So I prefer an electric car to other cars and I want to be a model of an electric car.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thank for sending me this answer to our homework from last week.
I hope that your dream of becoming an electric car model will come true. You just have to work hard and keep focused.
See you!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
Because the electric car is good for the natural environment and their sounds are smaller than others.
>> Correct!
So I prefer an electric car to other cars and I want to be a model of an electric car.
>> So I prefer an electric car over the other cars and I want to be a model of an electric car.
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