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2021-01-15 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

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I don\'t know the certain name of the site. The site is in Canada. When I went to Canada, I fell in love with the scenery. There was a river in Vancouver, this river is the most beautiful site that I\'ve ever seen.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

A thing of beauty is meant to be seen by many. Someday I hope that you and the people you love can go and see that place again.

Thank for doing your homework always.

See you in class next week.

-T. Donna =)

I don\'t know the certain name of the site.
>> Correct!

The site is in Canada. When I went to Canada, I fell in love with the scenery.
>> Correct!

There was a river in Vancouver, this river is the most beautiful site that I\'ve ever seen.
>> Correct!

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