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2012-01-27 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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hi^^ I want to see you.ㅋㅋ This is my task~~ I think mass media has big power to lead the life of public. If young girl like a movie star, she want to imitate her fashion style & appearance. If young boy pretended to be powerful like a gangster. But mass media has many good things. It give new informatoin, news and fun things. The most important thing is subjectivity to distinguish what kind of good or bad.

강사 첨삭

Hi! Thanks for sending your composition.I hope that you enjoyed your vacation.Looking forward to see you. Teacher Aurora hi^^I want to see you.ㅋㅋ >>I want to talk to you.>>Correct.This is my task~~ >>Correct. I think mass media has big power to lead the life of public. >>I think that mass media has a big power to lead the lives of the public.or I think that mass media has a big influence on lives of people.If young girl like a movie star, she want to imitate her fashion style & appearance. >>If a young girl idolizes a movie star, she wants to imitate the fashion style and appearance of the star.If young boy pretended to be powerful like a gangster. >>If a young boy pretends to be powerful, he would act like a gangster.But mass media has many good things. It give new informatoin, news and fun things. >>Mass media has many advantages. It gives new information,news and fun topics.The most important thing is subjectivity to distinguish what kind of good or bad. >>The important thing is subjectivity- it is to distinguish good from bad.

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