Task
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I think all of the cities have their own interests.
If I have to choose one, I\'ll choose Busan.
Because Busan has many landmarks and beautiful beaches and many places that you can enjoy, and Busan is near the sea so you can enjoy many kinds of seafood.
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I think all of the cities have their own interests.
>> I think every city has something interesting.
If I have to choose one, I\'ll choose Busan.
>> Correct
Because Busan has many landmarks and beautiful beaches and many places that you can enjoy, and Busan is near the sea so you can enjoy many kinds of seafood.
>> I think every city has something interesting.
If I have to choose one, I\'ll choose Busan.
>> Correct
Because Busan has many landmarks and beautiful beaches and many places that you can enjoy, and Busan is near the sea so you can enjoy many kinds of seafood.
>> Busan has many landmarks, beautiful beaches, and many places that you can enjoy. Also, Busan is near the sea. So, you can enjoy many kinds of seafood.
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