Task

2012-01-28 · 첨삭 강사 ali

학생이 쓴 원문

This is my task. I like study alone. because it take much time if I study with others. And there are many gaps of capacity. Than it is very hard to adjust personal level. Have a happy weekend. Bye^^

강사 첨삭

Hi there! Thank you for making your composition! I can see your improvement in our studies. However you should always practice any corrections I make so that you can use all of those in your daily conversations. Continue studying and be inspired with the beauty of learning! Be safe! T.Aurora  This is my task. >>This is my composition.I like study alone. >>I like to study alone. because it take much time if I study with others. >>It\'s because it would take much of my time if I study with others.And there are many gaps of capacity. Than it is very hard to adjust personal level.>>Another is that I have to adjust my way of thinking to the level with my companions in studying. Have a happy weekend. Bye^^ >>Correct!

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