Task
학생이 쓴 원문
Body language is important when I go to another place that I can\'t explain only use words.
Of course, in all of life, we use body language like gestures and facial expressions.
But the situation that most need body language is when I go to another country.
Because if I don\'t know the country\'s language, it makes me can communicate with foreigners without speaking.
So body langauge is important.
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- Teacher Sophia
>> Body language is important because It helps me interpret my verbal message.
Of course, in all of life, we use body language like gestures and facial expressions.
Of course, in all of life, we use body language like gestures and facial expressions.
>> In our life, we use body language such as gestures and facial expressions.
But the situation that most need body language is when I go to another country.
But the situation that most need body language is when I go to another country.
>> Body language must be used when going to other countries.
Because if I don\'t know the country\'s language, it makes me can communicate with foreigners without speaking.
Because if I don\'t know the country\'s language, it makes me can communicate with foreigners without speaking.
>> Because, if I don\'t know the country\'s language, it would help me communicate with the foreigners easily.
So body langauge is important.
So body langauge is important.
>> So, body language is important.
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