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My favorite food is fried chicken.
There are many kinds of chicken and chicken brands.
So I can enjoy many flavors of fried chicken.
Of course, it’s bad for my health but it’s so delicious so I can’t stop to eat.
I eat fried chicken once or more times a week
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>> Correct
There are many kinds of chicken and chicken brands.
There are many kinds of chicken and chicken brands.
>> Correct
So I can enjoy many flavors of fried chicken.
So I can enjoy many flavors of fried chicken.
>> So, I can enjoy many flavors of fried chicken.
Of course, it’s bad for my health but it’s so delicious so I can’t stop to eat.
Of course, it’s bad for my health but it’s so delicious so I can’t stop to eat.
>> Of course, it’s bad for my health. But chicken is so delicious that\'s why I can’t resist eating it.
I eat fried chicken once or more times a week
I eat fried chicken once or more times a week
>> I eat fried chicken once or many times in a week.
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