Task
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I always respect my friends. So I don\'t use cursing and I try to blame them.
From the beginning, I don\'t make friendship with the people who smoke and use a lot of cursing.
And I regard time commitments as vary important so I hate the friends who don\'t keep the time commitment.
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- Teacher Sophia
I always respect my friends.
- Teacher Sophia
I always respect my friends.
>> Correct
So I don\'t use cursing and I try to blame them.
>> So, I don\'t curse them or try to blame them.
From the beginning, I don\'t make friendship with the people who smoke and use a lot of cursing.
>> Correct
And I regard time commitments as vary important so I hate the friends who don\'t keep the time commitment.
And I regard time commitments as vary important so I hate the friends who don\'t keep the time commitment.
>> Also, I consider time as commitment and it\'s very important. So, I hate those friends who doesn\'t keep that commitment.
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