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When I go out with my friend, we have a routine.
First, we go to karaoke or amusement arcade.
Second, we eat dinner or go to drink.
At last, we go to a PC cafe or karaoke.
We usually do according to this routine.
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>> When I go out with my friend, we follow our routine.
First, we go to karaoke or amusement arcade.
First, we go to karaoke or amusement arcade.
>> Correct
Second, we eat dinner or go to drink.
Second, we eat dinner or go to drink.
>> Second, we eat dinner or have a drink.
At last, we go to a PC cafe or karaoke.
At last, we go to a PC cafe or karaoke.
>> And lastly, we go to a PC cafe or karaoke.
We usually do according to this routine.
We usually do according to this routine.
>> We usually follow this routine accordingly.
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