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2021-04-28 · 첨삭 강사 Sophia

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I lost 18kg when I was a high school student for improving my appearance. And now I try to maintain my weight. I have braces on my teeth, which are for health and also for appearance. Lastly, I try to wear clothes that look good on others.

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I lost 18kg when I was a high school student for improving my appearance.

>> I lost 18kg when I was a high school student because I want to improve my appearance.
And now I try to maintain my weight.

>> Correct
I have braces on my teeth, which are for health and also for appearance.

>> Correct
Lastly, I try to wear clothes that look good on others.

>> Lastly, I try to wear clothes that will look good on me.

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