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I think electronic cars are better than others because electronic cars are eco-friendly cars but the machinery part is a little different so you have to do test-drive.
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I think electronic cars are better than others because electronic cars are eco-friendly cars but the machinery part is a little different so you have to do test-drive.
>> I think electronic cars are better than others because they are eco-friendly cars but the machinery part is a little different so you have to do test-drive.
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