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The first one of the disadvantages of visiting popular tourist spots is that there are many other people so you can enjoy enough the spot because of the people and second is that the popular spots have high prices.
And the first one of advantages of visiting popular tourist spots is that there are the reasons that why it is famous like famous art or having a beautiful landscape and there are many varied things to enjoy because there became the main street.
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I must agree with your opinion, [이름]! I also don\'t like going to a crowded place because it\'s hard to take a nice picture. Thank you for sharing!-Faith-
The first one of the disadvantages of visiting popular tourist spots is that there are many other people so you can enjoy enough the spot because of the people and The first disadvantage of visiting popular tourist spots is that there are many other people so you cannot enjoy it enough.
second is that the popular spots have high prices.
>> Second, the popular spots have high prices.
And the first one of advantages of visiting popular tourist spots is that there are the reasons that why it is famous like famous art or having a beautiful landscape
And the first one of advantages of visiting popular tourist spots is that there are the reasons that why it is famous like famous art or having a beautiful landscape
>> On the other hand, one advantage of visiting popular tourist spots is that there are famous arts or beautiful landscapes.
and there are many varied things to enjoy because there became the main street.
>> Also, there are many varied things to enjoy because a main street is located there.
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