Task
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When people go to a cafe, some people want to take sanctuary alone in a cozy place but some other people want to socialize with someone
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Good day, [이름]! You are really good at this, making a long sentence with all the vocabulary words in the book. Nice work!-Faith-
When people go to a cafe, some people want to take sanctuary alone in a cozy place but some other people want to socialize with someone
>> When people go to a café, some people want to stay in a cozy sanctuary alone but some other people want to socialize with someone.
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