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It\'s a quite difficult problem and also it\'s a very simple problem too.
Because if my friend was late for an appointment for the first time, I can understand him but if he is late every day without the right reason, I will cut the friendship with him.
It\'s my solution about breaking a time appointed.
It looks very strict but I think being punctual is the first step to respect someone.
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Great work, [이름]! I totally respect your opinion because it is reasonable. At least, you show patience before taking your final actions.-Faith-
It\'s a quite difficult problem and also it\'s a very simple problem too.>> It\'s a quite difficult but a very simple problem, at the same time.
Because if my friend was late for an appointment for the first time, I can understand him but if he is late every day without the right reason, I will cut the friendship with him.
Because if my friend was late for an appointment for the first time, I can understand him but if he is late every day without the right reason, I will cut the friendship with him.
>> Because, if my friend is late for an appointment for the first time, I can understand him but if he is late every day without the right reason, I will cut off my friendship with him.
It\'s my solution about breaking a time appointed.
It\'s my solution about breaking a time appointed.
>> It\'s my solution about him breaking our appointments habitually.
It looks very strict but I think being punctual is the first step to respect someone.
It looks very strict but I think being punctual is the first step to respect someone.
>> CORRECT
OR It looks harsh but I believe punctuality shows your respect to others.
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