Task
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to try Game Nights and Live Events, Bowling Fun.
Because I think these are the funniest thing of the examples and if I can enjoy these with my friends, I can sure it will be very fun and memorable.
For these reasons, I chose the three social activities.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]! I guess these are really exciting activities. I hope you would have a chance to enjoy them soon!-Faith-
I want to try Game Nights and Live Events, Bowling Fun.>> I want to try Game Nights, Live Events and Bowling Fun.
Because I think these are the funniest thing of the examples and if I can enjoy these with my friends, I can sure it will be very fun and memorable.
Because I think these are the funniest thing of the examples and if I can enjoy these with my friends, I can sure it will be very fun and memorable.
>> Because I think these are the funniest things among the examples and if I can enjoy these with my friends, I can be sure that it will be very fun and memorable.
For these reasons, I chose the three social activities.
For these reasons, I chose the three social activities.
>> CORRECT
OR These are the three main reasons for my choices.
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