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First of all, many people who know their bad habits don\'t try to change them because it\'s quite difficult.
So I think the first thing that they have to do when they want to change their bad habits is promising themselves.
And after it, you should find a good way to replace the bad habits and keep your promise.
Every time you have to care about your bad habits and try to replace that.
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I agree that it\'s hard to change oneself, [이름]! However, each of us can change our bad habits when we give more efforts and with proper mindset. Have a good one!-Faith-
First of all, many people who know their bad habits don\'t try to change them because it\'s quite difficult.>> CORRECT
OR I think people who are aware of their bad habits don\'t try to change them because it\'s quite challenging.
So I think the first thing that they have to do when they want to change their bad habits is promising themselves.
So I think the first thing that they have to do when they want to change their bad habits is promising themselves.
>> So I think the first thing that they have to do when they want to change their bad habits is to make a promise to themselves.
And after it, you should find a good way to replace the bad habits and keep your promise.
And after it, you should find a good way to replace the bad habits and keep your promise.
>> CORRECT
Every time you have to care about your bad habits and try to replace that.
Every time you have to care about your bad habits and try to replace that.
>> Then, you have to be mindful of your bad habits and you should try to replace them.
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