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I\'m not sure I understand the question.
I want that my country celebrates my birthday like Christmas.
I think my birthday is one of the biggest events at least for me.
So I hope that I can be a great man who my country can celebrate my birthday.
강사 첨삭
Wow, [이름]! I am sure if you continue to be courageous for your country, you will become that someone you want to be.-Faith-
I\'m not sure I understand the question.>> I\'m not sure if I understand the question.
I want that my country celebrates my birthday like Christmas.
I want that my country celebrates my birthday like Christmas.
>> CORRECT
OR I wish my country could celebrate my birthday like Christmas.
I think my birthday is one of the biggest events at least for me.
I think my birthday is one of the biggest events at least for me.
>> CORRECT
So I hope that I can be a great man who my country can celebrate my birthday.
So I hope that I can be a great man who my country can celebrate my birthday.
>> So I hope that I could be a great man so that my country would celebrate my birthday.
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