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I think Korean students excel at math and using computers.
In Korea, many high schools focus on mathematic and really many students learn mathematic more than others.
And we have a coding subject for using a computer and Korean internet speed is top of the world.
So Korean students are better than other countries\' students at these things.
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I must agree with you on that, [이름]! I must admit, I am not good at Mathematics. Anyway, nice answer! -Faith-
I think Korean students excel at math and using computers.>> CORRECT
In Korea, many high schools focus on mathematic and really many students learn mathematic more than others.
In Korea, many high schools focus on mathematic and really many students learn mathematic more than others.
>> In Korea, many high schools focus on Mathematic and many students learn Mathematics more than other subjects.
And we have a coding subject for using a computer and Korean internet speed is top of the world.
And we have a coding subject for using a computer and Korean internet speed is top of the world.
>> And we have a coding subject to use a computer and the internet speed in Korea is the fastest in the world.
So Korean students are better than other countries\' students at these things.
So Korean students are better than other countries\' students at these things.
>> CORRECT
OR Therefore, Korean students are better in the abovementioned fields.
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