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학생이 쓴 원문
Every single day, my priorities are changed.
When I was young, my main priority was family.
And sometimes, I thought my main priority is my lover.
But now my main priority is me because nowadays I have to achieve many things so I have to care for myself first.
강사 첨삭
Good work, [이름]! I think before you could take care and love others, you need to give it to yourself first so you could give whatever you have.-Faith-
Every single day, my priorities are changed.>> CORRECT
When I was young, my main priority was family.
When I was young, my main priority was family.
>> CORRECT
OR I used to make my family as my priority at a young age.
And sometimes, I thought my main priority is my lover.
And sometimes, I thought my main priority is my lover.
>> And sometimes, I think my main priority is my lover.
But now my main priority is me because nowadays I have to achieve many things so I have to care for myself first.
But now my main priority is me because nowadays I have to achieve many things so I have to care for myself first.
>> But now my main priority is myself because nowadays I have to achieve many things so I have to take care of myself first.
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