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of course, I think our health care system can be improved more than now.
I hope the Korean health care system will apply more like an orthodontic.
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Hello, [이름]! I think this will be possible. I am very positive about it.-Faith-
of course, I think our health care system can be improved more than now.
>> Of course, I think our health care system can be improved more than now.
I hope the Korean health care system will apply more like an orthodontic.
I hope the Korean health care system will apply more like an orthodontic.
>> I hope the Korean health care system will be applied on orthodontics.
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