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2012-02-06 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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hi ^^ I try to speak slowly and exactly. thank you. Movie is fun. Because the movie has a story. People always want to have fun thing in life. Also, Movie can touch the mind of people and than make refresh them.

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Hello Ms. [이름]! Thank you for sending me your homework. Review the corrections that I\'ve made and continue practicing. Take care! Teacher Aurora   hi ^^ >> Hi.I try to speak slowly and exactly. >> I\'ll try to speak slowly and clearly. thank you. >> Thank you. Movie is fun. >> Watching a movie is fun. Because the movie has a story. >> Because a movie has a story.People always want to have fun thing in life. >> People always want to have fun things in life.Also, Movie can touch the mind of people and than make refresh them. >> Also, a movie can touch and then refresh the minds of people.  

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