Task
학생이 쓴 원문
hi ^^
I try to speak slowly and exactly. thank you.
Movie is fun. Because the movie has a story.
People always want to have fun thing in life.
Also, Movie can touch the mind of people and than make refresh them.
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Teacher Aurora
hi ^^
>> Hi.I try to speak slowly and exactly.
>> I\'ll try to speak slowly and clearly.
thank you.
>> Thank you.
Movie is fun.
>> Watching a movie is fun.
Because the movie has a story.
>> Because a movie has a story.People always want to have fun thing in life.
>> People always want to have fun things in life.Also, Movie can touch the mind of people and than make refresh them.
>> Also, a movie can touch and then refresh the minds of people.
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