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2012-02-09 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Your task that you're givn is harder and harder. Ha ha Although I make mistake many parts, I'll try to composit it. My task is.... It has passed 14years when 21th century has begun. Compared 10 years before, I think so many thing has changed. For example, Life style is fast. Papers are disappear more and more. A cellular phone is essential better. Life style is more convenient but humanity is more dissipated. Bye^^

강사 첨삭

Hi! How are you? I hope you had a great day. I know you can do every task I give you. You can do it! It will help you in learning English well. Take Care. Teacher Aurora Your task that you\'re givn is harder and harder. Ha ha>>The task that you\'re giving be is getting harder.Although I make mistake many parts, I\'ll try to composit it.>>Eventhough I make a lot of mistakes. I\'m trying my best to do it.My task is....It has passed 14years when 21th century has begun. >>It has been 14 years when 21st century begun.Compared 10 years before, I think so many thing has changed. >>Compared from 10 years before, I think many things had changed.For example, Life style is fast. >>For example: Liferstyle is fast. Papers are disappear more and more. >>Papers are disappering more and more.A cellular phone is essential better. >>Cellular phone is better. Life style is more convenient but humanity is more dissipated. >>Lifestyle is more convenient but humanity is getting worse.Bye^^ >>Goodbye.

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