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2012-02-22 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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You can lost your friend. If you want to borrow the money for your friend, you had better not receive the money that you give. without that kind of mind, you and your friend must disappointed each other.

강사 첨삭

It really is a beautiful day today. ^^ Thank you for doing your homework Ms. [이름]. Seems like you woke up early today. Hope to talk to you on Friday.   T. Aurora Here are my corretions:   You can lost your friend. >>You can lose your friend.If you want to borrow the money for your friend, you had better not receive the money that you give. >>If you want to borrow money from your friend, you had better not expect to be paid back. >>If you want to borrow money from your friend, you had better not ask your friend to pay you back. without that kind of mind, you and your friend must disappointed each other. >>Without that kind of thinking, you and your friend will have conflicts with each other. >>If you don\'t have your mind set into that, then you and your friend is likely to have conflicts with each other.

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