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Good morning [이름]!
Thank you for your time today and for sharing your thoughts about our topic in the composition.
Well, we are all acting in our own self-interest I think. kkkk.
Me too. hahaha
Anyway, see you again tomorrow!
Enjoy your day!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Do you AGREE or DISAGREE that \"a person always acts in his own self-interest.\" Why or why not?
I agree with that.
>> correct!
I think it depends on the surrounded situation a lot.
>> I think it depends on the surrounding situation/ circumstances a lot.
>> or: I think it depends a lot on the current situation.
Anyone can act in his own self-interest, also he has a right to act by his own decision.
>> correct!
>> or; Anyone can act in his own self-interest and he has also the right to act in his own decision.
And the decision is affected by the surrounded situation.
>> And the decision is affected by the surrounding situation/ circumstances.
For example, in my case, I had decided to resign as a teacher of academy in Sock-cho for moving to better condition work.
>> For example, in my case, I decided to resign as an academy teacher in Sock-cho to move to a better working condition.
It can be said I behaved in my self-interest.
>> It can be said that I behaved in my own self-interest.
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