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2015-03-31 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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When do you feel best? In the morning, afternoon, or evening? I feel best in evening. Bcause I can come back to home from work. And I can take rest. I enjoy my free evening doing what I want to do. It can be whatever - reading books, eating deliciouns dishes or looking the SNS like Facebook. And I plan for tomorrw in every evening. So I feel best in evening.

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Hello [이름]!

Thank you for your time today and for sharing your idea about our topic.

Please do not forget to review the corrections I have written below.

Thank a bunch!
Take care and see you tomorrow!


Always,
Kathrine ^^


When do you feel best? In the morning, afternoon, or evening?

I feel best in evening.

>> I feel best in the evening.

Bcause I can come back to home from work.

>> Because I can come back home from work.

And I can take rest.

>> correct!

>> or: And I can also take a rest.

I enjoy my free evening doing what I want to do.

>> I enjoy my free time in the evening doing what I want to do.

 It can be whatever - reading books, eating deliciouns dishes or looking the SNS like Facebook.

>> It can be whatever like reading books, eating delicious dishes, or looking at the SNS or Facebook.

And I plan for tomorrw in every evening.

>> And I make a plan for the next day in the evening.

So I feel best in evening.

>> So I feel best in the evening.

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