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Kathrine ^^
When do you feel best? In the morning, afternoon, or evening?
I feel best in evening.
>> I feel best in the evening.
Bcause I can come back to home from work.
>> Because I can come back home from work.
And I can take rest.
>> correct!
>> or: And I can also take a rest.
I enjoy my free evening doing what I want to do.
>> I enjoy my free time in the evening doing what I want to do.
It can be whatever - reading books, eating deliciouns dishes or looking the SNS like Facebook.
>> It can be whatever like reading books, eating delicious dishes, or looking at the SNS or Facebook.
And I plan for tomorrw in every evening.
>> And I make a plan for the next day in the evening.
So I feel best in evening.
>> So I feel best in the evening.
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