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학생이 쓴 원문
-The most memorable day in my life-
When I was 22 years old, I played in a band. I was a singer.
One day, we performed first concert at the COEX.
There were a large audience.
I was very nervous but excited.
That concert went well and was successful.
It was the most memorable day in my life.
강사 첨삭
Hi there,
That\'s so interesting. I\'m also interested in music. ^^ Let\'s talk about it in the class. see you later.
-T.Aurora-
-The most memorable day in my life->>CorrectWhen I was 22 years old, I played in a band.
>>When I was 22 years old, i was a member of a band.
I was a singer.>>CorrectOne day, we performed our first concert at the COEX.>>CorrectThere were a large audience.>>There was a large number of audience.I was very nervous but excited.>>CorrectThat concert went well and was successful.>>CorrectIt was the most memorable day in my life.
>>Correct
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