task1.4
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear Sir or Madam
I had to go to Boston last week as a business trip. After I checked several reviews online, I decided to stay in your hotel from Monday to Wednesday. I had received a lot of good services, so I am very happy about my decision.
When I arrived at your hotel Monday morning, I was starving because my flight was delayed. Young woman at the front arranged sending dinner to my room even though the kitchen was closed. In additions, I forgot bringing some items when leaving the hotel. Your maid followed me outside of hotel and gave those items. Before getting into the taxi, I was willing to tip her, but she did not take that saying she is pleased to help me.
I can say that your staffs provide great services. I would like to say thank you and all the staffs at your hotel. If I visited Boston again, I definitely would stay at your hotel again. In additions, I would recommend your hotel to my friends and colleagues as well.
Kindly,
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강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]~
Here are your corrections:
Here are your corrections:
I had to go to Boston last week as a business trip.
>> I had to go to Boston last week for a business trip.
After I checked several reviews online, I decided to stay in your hotel from Monday to Wednesday.
>> CORRECT
>> (It would be better if you can add more details before saying you checked several reviews.)
>> I browsed online for any potential hotels I will be staying at. After I checked several reviews online on several hotels, I ended choosing your hotel. I stayed from Monday to Wednesday night.
I had received a lot of good services, so I am very happy about my decision.
>> I had received a lot of good services from your hotel so I was very happy about my decision.
>> CORRECT
Young woman at the front arranged sending dinner to my room even though the kitchen was closed.
>> A young woman at the front desk immediately arranged my dinner to be sent to my room the moment I requested it.
In additions, I forgot bringing some items when leaving the hotel.
>> When I was about to go, I noticed that I forgot to bring some of my stuff.
Your maid followed me outside of hotel and gave those items.
>> Thankfully, one of your employees brought my items back.
Before getting into the taxi, I was willing to tip her, but she did not take that saying she is pleased to help me.
>> Before I got into the taxi, I was about to reach for my purse and give her a tip, but she declined. She said that she\'s more than pleased to have helped me.
>> Your staff provided great service and they are honest and helpful.
I would like to say thank you and all the staffs at your hotel.
>> I would like to thank you and all your staff at your hotel.
If I visited Boston again, I definitely would stay at your hotel again.
>> If I will be visiting Boston again, I will definitely stay at your hotel.
In additions, I would recommend your hotel to my friends and colleagues as well.
>> I will be recommending your hotel to my friends and colleagues as well.
>> Kind regards, (Do not use \"Kindly\" in ending your letter)
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