Tattoos
학생이 쓴 원문
In many countries Tattoos are thought of negative things. But the negative image come from our experiences. In the past, only criminal person did tattoos but these days many people are doing tattoos as a fashion. As long as we do tattoos in a good intention, it will be accepted by more people.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] Ki! Thank you for sharing your candid opinion about tattoos. Many people have different opinions and thoughts about those people with tattoos. Nevertheless, getting a tattoo is their own expression and decision. Let\'s respect them. We will talk more about this in class. See you! ~T. Lyn
In many countries Tattoos are thought of negative things.
>>In many countries, tattoos are viewed negatively.
But the negative image come from our experiences.
>>However, negative images come from our experiences.
In the past, only criminal person did tattoos but these days many people are doing tattoos as a fashion.
>>In the past, only criminals had tattoos, but nowadays there are many people who wear tattoos like a trend or fashion.
As long as we do tattoos in a good intention, it will be accepted by more people.
>>As long as we do tattoos with good intentions, they will be accepted by more people.
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