taught me
학생이 쓴 원문
I don`t remember anything.
When my brother stole something in a market, I saw my brother who was beaten up.
At that time I thought that never steal other\'s things.
My parents fought for each other. As I see them, I realized the parents affected the children.
I tried to think about how my daily life is. I wonder whether I influenced them positively.
강사 첨삭
Hi Mrs. [Name]! Thank you for doing your homework. You did a wonderful job. Keep up the good work.
We won\'t be seeing each other until next week so I hope you will have a very good Cheo Seok holiday. See you next week Mrs. [Name]~
We won\'t be seeing each other until next week so I hope you will have a very good Cheo Seok holiday. See you next week Mrs. [Name]~
Here are your corrections:
>> CORRECT
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>> I can\'t remember anything.
>> I can\'t remember anything.
>> When my brother stole something from the market, I saw him get beaten up.
>> At that time, I thought to never steal anything from anyone.
>> My parents fought a lot.
As I see them, I realized the parents affected the children.
>> As I see them, I realized that parents affect their children.
>> CORRECT
I wonder whether I influenced them positively.
>> I wonder whether I influenced them positively or not.
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