tax-free
학생이 쓴 원문
We know that duty free shop is one of the policy of encouraging for foreigner\'s purchases including countrymen.
They are very harmful everyone like gambling, smoke and marijuana and so on.
The meaning of tax-free is stimulate that people join it to do more.
So I oppose about the tax free policy of gambling.
강사 첨삭
Ms. [이름]!
I think this is the disadvantage of tax- fee services. People enjoy the service without any obligations.
Thank you for this,
Aki~
We know that duty free shop is one of the policy of encouraging for foreigner\'s purchases including countrymen.
>>> We know that duty duty-free shop is one of the policies encouraging foreigners\' purchases, including countrymen.
They are very harmful everyone like gambling, smoke and marijuana and so on.
>>> They are very harmful; everyone likes gambling, smoking, marijuana, and so on.
The meaning of tax-free is stimulate that people join it to do more.
>>> The meaning of tax-free is stimulating people to join or do more.
So I oppose about the tax free policy of gambling.
>>> So I oppose the tax-free policy of gambling.
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