Taxi sharing
학생이 쓴 원문
In my opinion, it is not good policy for taxi sharing.
When I take a taxi, I want to keep my safety and speed.
I think it is dangerous to ride with others who I don\'t know.
A taxi is an enclosed space as running transportation.
If criminals conspire crimes they can cause it easily.
It\'s more dangerous they are using for the app silently.
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday, Ms. [이름]! Thanks for sharing your thought. In my case, taxi sharing is fine a long as we are in the same neighborhood and passing the same route. I usually do that when I am late for my appointment but I do not do it at night.
Aki~
In my opinion, it is not good policy for taxi sharing.
>>> In my opinion, it is not a good policy for taxi sharing.
OR >>> I think taxi sharing is not a good policy.
When I take a taxi, I want to keep my safety and speed.
When I take a taxi, I want to keep my safety and speed.
>>> When I take a taxi, I want to keep my safety and my travel time.
I think it is dangerous to ride with others who I don\'t know.
I think it is dangerous to ride with others who I don\'t know.
>>> I think it is dangerous to ride with others whom I don\'t know.
A taxi is an enclosed space as running transportation.
>>> A taxi is an enclosed space as a public transportation.
If criminals conspire crimes they can cause it easily.
>>> Correct!
OR>>> If criminals plot crimes, they can easily do it.
It\'s more dangerous they are using for the app silently.
>>> It\'s more dangerous because they might be using the app secretly.
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