Taxis

2022-08-29 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

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Anyway I don\'t want to use self-driving taxis now. Autonomous vehicles and automation systems are spreading in the our dairy life. When I visited a big restaurant last week, I was very embarssed because robots are serving for people. They delivered the food for us. But the robots couldn\'t move the food onto the my table. I had to move the food myself from the robot to the table. I am afraid of distalization too quickly in all field.

강사 첨삭

Good day, Ms. [이름]!
I totally understand you. Technology is taking much of the people\'s job and it becomes a threat in the livelihood of everyone instead of  being a \"help\" for us.
Let\'s talk more of these later :)
Aki~
Anyway, I don\'t want to use self-driving taxis now.
>>> CORRECT!

Autonomous vehicles and automation systems are spreading in the our dairy life.
>>> Autonomous vehicles and automation systems are spreading in our daily lives.

When I visited a big restaurant last week, I was very embarssed because robots are serving for people.
>>> When I visited a big restaurant last week, I was very embarrassed because robots are serving  people

They delivered the food for us.
>>> CORRECT!

But the robots couldn\'t move the food onto the my table.
>>> But the robots couldn\'t move the food onto my table.

I had to move the food myself from the robot to the table.
>>> CORRECT!

I am afraid of distalization too quickly in all fiel
>>> I am afraid that digitalization happens too quickly in all life

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