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Theme: [ESSAY] If you were going to be a teacher, where and what would you like to teach?
I like to teach science at the science room.
Because I like science and doing experiment.
My scientist role model is Mrs.Curie. She was a French scientist.
I like doing experiment and studing science so I want to teach science at the science room.
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Here\'s your first edited homework, Clair.
Cheers,
Jean~~
Theme: [ESSAY] If you were going to be a teacher, where and what would you like to teach?
I like to teach science at the science room.
Because I like science and doing experiment.
>> I enjoy teaching science in the science room because I like the subject and doing experiments.
My scientist role model is Mrs.Curie. She was a French scientist.
>> or: I am inspired by Marie Curie who was a French scientist.
I like doing experiment and studing science so I want to teach science at the science room.
>> I love doing experiments and studying science so I want to teach the subject in the science room or laboratory.
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