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Hello Teacher~ I am really sorry to forget my homework. So, I will write about myself. My Korean name is JinHee Bang. I live in IlSan which is nearby Seoul. I have one younger sister and she is very cute. I want to say about my personality. Actually, I am a little bit clumsy. I often forget something important. Today, I forgot our class start time. I thoght it is 6:30am.T-T Because I suffer from insomnia. I am absent-minded. Tomorrow I will log-in on time. I hope you have a nice day! See you tomorrow~

Hello [이름]! Thank you for your composition. I really appreciate that you still find time to write eventhough you suffer from insomnia. I encourage you to write more everyday. It will be great help to improve your writing skill.                                 I understand your situation. I had insomnia before. I hope to see you on time tomorrow. Hello Teacher~ >> CorrectI am really sorry to forget my homework. >> CorrectSo, I will write about myself. >> So, I will write something about myself.My Korean name is JinHee Bang. >> CorrectI live in IlSan which is nearby Seoul. >> I live in Ilsan which is near Seoul.I have one younger sister and she is very cute. >>CorrectI want to say about my personality. >>I want to tell you about my personality. Actually, I am a little bit clumsy. >> Correct  I often forget something important. >> Correct Today, I forgot our class start time. >> Correct I thoght it is 6:30am.T-T Because I suffer from insomnia. >> I thought it was 6:30 T-T because I suffer from insomnia. I am absent-minded. >>CorrectTomorrow I will log-in on time. >> CorrectI hope you have a nice day!>> CorrectSee you tomorrow~ >>Correct