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A the cloest neighbor
I have always lived in seoul. But I have little neighbors in my area due to moving around a lot in seoul. when I was young I had many neighbors and friends who I was close with in my neighborhood. so I want tell you my cloest neighbor in the past instead of present. One neighbor that is closest to me is the lee faimily. lee family consist of four members, parents, two daughters. close with older daughter. I usually played with her in childhood. We were same elementary school, and we were classmate several times and we even studyed in a same academy. they lived down stairs of my house. I have had several pleasant memories with them. Someday we went to the sea together and digged the sandbar to catch shells. Before they moved another place. we were so close. My mother keep touching with them until now.
Hi. Teacher kristel, sorry, I am late. Actually i didn't understand your speaking about way to upload writings due to speaking spead so fast. ㅠㅠ
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Hello there Wison~~
Good Morning!!! ^^ I am glad that you\'re able to send your script here!^^
Anyway, kindly check the corrections I made for you....
Also, I am so sorry that I had to speak really fast yesterday while giving you the instruction coz we were running out of time
and I had to call the next student...kkk Hope you understand!
Have a great day and see you later...
T.Kristel
A the cloest neighbor >>My closest neighbor.I have always lived in seoul. But I have little neighbors in my area due to moving around a lot in seoul. >>CORRECT!! But I have a few neighbors in my area due to moving around a lot in Seoul.
when I was young I had many neighbors and friends who I was close with in my neighborhood. >>CORRECT!!
so I want tell you my cloest neighbor in the past instead of present. One neighbor that is closest to me is the lee faimily. >>so I want tell you about my cloest neighbor in the past instead of the present. One of the closest to me is the Lee faimily.
lee family consist of four members, parents, two daughters. close with older daughter. I usually played with her in childhood. >>The Lee family consists of four members, their parents and two daughters. I am close with their older daughter. I used to play with her in our childhood.
We were same elementary school, and we were classmate several times and we even studyed in a same academy. they lived down stairs of my house.>>We attended the same elementary school, and we were classmates several times and we even studied in the same academy. They lived down stairs of my house.
have had several pleasant memories with them. Someday we went to the sea together and digged the sandbar to catch shells.>>I have had several pleasant memories with them. Some day we went to the sea together and digged the sandbar to collect shells.
Before they moved another place. we were so close. My mother keep touching with them until now.>>Before they moved to another place, we were so close. My mother is keeping in touch with them until now.Hi. Teacher kristel, sorry, I am late. Actually i didn\'t understand your speaking about way to upload writings due to speaking spead so fast. ㅠㅠ
>>Hi. Teacher Kristel, sorry for the late submission. Actually i didn\'t understand what you\'ve said about the way to upload my writings because you were speaking speed was so fast. ㅠㅠ
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