Teacher!
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I'm so sorry for today's class abscence.Last night I didn't check my cellphone's battery.I use the alarm in the cellphone and the alarm didn't ring.It wasn't recharged enough so I couldn't pick up the phone.Have a nice weekend!!
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Hello [이름]!
Thank you for informing me about that. It's too bad that it's Friday because I won't call you tomorrow. Anyway, I hope that you will have a good weekend. I'll talk to you on Monday!
T. Jane ^^
I'm so sorry for today's class abscence.
>> I'm so sorry for being absent in the class today.
Last night I didn't check my cellphone's battery.
>> correct
I use the alarm in the cellphone and the alarm didn't ring.
>> correct
It wasn't recharged enough so I couldn't pick up the phone
>> It wasn't recharged enough so it wasn't able to ring and I couldn't take your call.
Have a nice weekend!!
>> correct
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