Teacher!
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there, Teacher!
Happy Tuesday!
Thank you for your kind help every day!
Thank you teacher feedback elaborate.
The first one is too busy at work did your homework.
I'm very sorry.
Have a good afternoon.
Lucia^-^
강사 첨삭
Dear [Name],
Good evening and happy Tuesday! ^.^
First of all, I would like to thank you for appreciating my effort! ^^
By the way, don\'t be sorry.
I understand why you didn\'t do your homework.
I am still glad because you still made a composition today.
That\'s all for now! ^^
Happy reading! ^^,
See you very soon! ^^.
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
Hi there, Teacher! >> CORRECT!
Happy Tuesday! >> CORRECT!Thank you for your kind help every day!>> CORRECT!
Thank you teacher feedback elaborate.>> Thank you for elaborating your feedback.
>> OR: Thank you for elaborating your feedback!
The first one is too busy at work did your homework.>> I THINK WHAT YOU WANT TO SAY IS: I was so busy at work that is why I couldn\'t do my homework.
>> OR: I couldn\'t do my homework, because I was so busy at work.
I\'m very sorry.>> CORRECT!Have a good afternoon.>> CORRECT!
>> OR: Have a good afternoon!
Lucia^-^
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: Lucia ^-^
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