Teacher!

2015-09-22 · 첨삭 강사 Paula

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Hi there, Teacher! Happy Tuesday! Thank you for your kind help every day! Thank you teacher feedback elaborate. The first one is too busy at work did your homework. I'm very sorry. Have a good afternoon. Lucia^-^

강사 첨삭

Dear [Name],   Good evening and happy Tuesday! ^.^   First of all, I would like to thank you for appreciating my effort! ^^   By the way, don\'t be sorry. I understand why you didn\'t do your homework. I am still glad because you still made a composition today.   That\'s all for now! ^^ Happy reading! ^^, See you very soon! ^^.   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Hi there, Teacher! >> CORRECT! Happy Tuesday! >> CORRECT!Thank you for your kind help every day!>> CORRECT! Thank you teacher feedback elaborate.>> Thank you for elaborating your feedback. >> OR: Thank you for elaborating your feedback! The first one is too busy at work did your homework.>> I THINK WHAT YOU WANT TO SAY IS: I was so busy at work that is why I couldn\'t do my homework. >> OR: I couldn\'t do my homework, because I was so busy at work. I\'m very sorry.>> CORRECT!Have a good afternoon.>> CORRECT! >> OR: Have a good afternoon! Lucia^-^ >> CORRECT! >> OR: Lucia ^-^

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