Teacher!!~!!

2011-05-30 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

학생이 쓴 원문

Oh, I'm really sorry about absent for our class. Being studying, I fell a sleep unwittingly. :( I'm so regrettable :( Anyway see you on Monday. Happy holiday~!!

강사 첨삭

Hello there! ^^ I appreciate this message you sent me regarding why you weren't able to have your classes with me. Anyway, it's okay because I understand that you were really sleepy and I'm sure you were also very tired. You've made a really good composition explaining what had happened and you were able to get the message across. Practice makes perfect. Just take note and study on the corrections I have made and continue to keep on writing. ^^,   Oh, I'm really sorry about absent for our class.>>> Oh, I'm really sorry for being absent for our class.Being studying, I fell a sleep unwittingly. :(>>> While studying, I fell asleep unwittingly. >>> While studying I unwittingly fell asleep.I'm so regrettable :(>>> I really regret doing that.Anyway see you on Monday. Happy holiday~!! >>> Correct

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